I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss H. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wednesday, July 1, 2020
Liam macaw facts
Hello readers I am sharing an infomation report about macaws .Please leave a comment
By Liam
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Hi Liam, Miss Goslin and the year 4s here. Kobe liked the way that you included lots of detail in your information report, we learned a lot. Cadie has seen a parrot before at Willowbank and it had 2 kinds of colours and lived in a cage. Lukus would like to ask how you picked the Macaws out of all the birds you like? We all know that you love birds!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks the macaws at wilowbank the red, blue and yellow one is the scarlet macaw.The blue and yellow one is the blue and gold macaw.
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hi Liam Jessica here l like the way that you put the names with the picture and it is fantast by Jess
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ReplyDeleteHi my name is Om. Liam I like the way you added some pics so you let as know what it is. So wee don't need to search it up.I loved the details that you added.Next time you should add some more fun facts if you know or you could search it up.i
ReplyDeleteTalofa Liam its kaia here i like your writing about bird
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