Hello readers today I am showing you my all about me. thanks for reading please leave a comment or a like
from Liam
I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss H. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello readers today I am showing you my all about me. thanks for reading please leave a comment or a like
from Liam
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hi Liam!
ReplyDeleteThis is Jahnaleigh. I like how you added a lot of detail into your work. I it reminds me when my friend said she wanted a bird breeder. Maybe next time you could make the pictures smaller so i can see the writing.
By Jahnaleigh (:
ReplyDeletekia kaha Liam
this is Jessica here i like the way that you did your subject in a good photo